What more do i need

a simple poem i wrote.

I will not take gold in exchange for friends

and i will not be told the friendship ever ends.

Silver doesn’t matter compared to family

as long as the latter

only loves and supports me.

Diamonds and pearls are nice,

but compared to my pets

there isn’t a price

i would pay without regrets.

I’m happy with what i have.

I have what i need.

What more do i need

than what i have?

Author's Note

I wrote this in 7th grade for an english assignment. We never had to turn it in though so if there are problems please tell me. Opinions are nice unless you are totally dissing it.

Reviews

[Relic]

You make some great points here Amanda. Family friends and pets are the most important things in our lives. Good poem.

[SonOfPlunder]

It's a good poem, with a good flow to it and obviously lots of sentimental emotion. But the end part "I have what i need, what more do i need, than what i have?" To me that seemed to ruin the flow of it, bit of an anti climax. But apart from that, solid