Maybe no one

My heart is breaking.

What do i do?

Who do i let see me cry?

Maybe no one.

I feel so alone,

in this ever growing world.

Who can fill this feeling?

Maybe no one.

I am invisible.

Never there.

Who am I to them?

Maybe I'm no one.

Maybe no one can mend me.

Maybe no one can see me.

Maybe i really am no one.

Maybe I really am all alone. 

My heart is breaking.

No one can mend it.

I am invisible.

I really am all alone.  

Author's Note

as always, comments and advice are appreciated.

Reviews

[Jake Donald Stephens]

There is always someone, somewhere, who will take the time to really care and help. There's just one catch. It's sometimes hard to find them.
Writing makes you someone, though, even when not many seem to notice. In time they will.
Be the best you can be, and you'll find that people will come to appreciate what you have to offer.
And these poems are a great start. :)

[Kamari's]

Very emotional and well wrote and clever bravo

[Sami Khalil]

"Maybe no one can mend me.

Maybe no one can see me.

Maybe i really am no one.

Maybe I really am all alone.




My heart is breaking."

A splendid read and write...Bravo....................