I would See

I was presented with the question "If you were recording a scene of violence/meanness, what would you see?"

"If you were tape recording the scene of violence/meanness, what would you see?"

I would see outcasts being excluded. I would see pain in hungry kids' eyes. I would see bloodshed and tears in war torn countries. I would see the invisible hurt in the happiest of smiles. I would see abuse. I would see lies. I would see our messed up reality. 

Author's Note

Short and sweet like me. Though not really sweet. I think a few sentences are better than a whole big paragraph/essay thing. Tell me your opinion because i would love to hear it.

Reviews

[Chaston]

I like how you are very honest and direct. And you seem sincere in exposing the evil of this world. The only thing I think is you should you use your art to be more confrontational of the suffering you encounter. To really push the meaning of your writing into the reader's face. To transform the sadness to creative action and transcend. But this is just my opinion and its been awhile since i was teenager. But don't stop writing. I definitely believe you are a poet, and as you continue to grow so will your strength.
peace