The continued journey into discovering ancestors of my past has led me to The Vikings and those who ruled the great Northern seas for many centuries. The Longships were impressive feats of design and enabled them to navigate both open seas and shallow rivers which helped these brave adventurers win many a battle!
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Anticipation of raging battle pulses through my veins.
When we win we ravage enemies’ riches for our coffer’s gains;
Such bounty seized gives us the power to capture even more.
Warriors sail, invade, and sack to even the bloody score.
WOW!! I love this part, this is wonderful...
enjoyed the read
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
My ancestral journey has had an amazing impact on my life, and on my writing! The discoveries have .. read moreMy ancestral journey has had an amazing impact on my life, and on my writing! The discoveries have been amazing, so it is my intent to share with others to encourage one to know your past, who your ancestors are!
I appreciate your review! Thank you!
1 Year Ago
i dug into mine, found out I'm Itallin, Irish, and dutch and german.. My 8th great grandma was the q.. read morei dug into mine, found out I'm Itallin, Irish, and dutch and german.. My 8th great grandma was the queen of England
Like you, I too have done much family research and built a family tree for my wife and myself. DNA tests say that my wife is 4% Swedish and Danish, and 3% Norwegian and Icelandic. It says that I am 5% Swedish and Danish. So we both have a trace of Viking blood in our veins. Your poem is both interesting and well crafted, Sheila. I enjoyed the read!
Your poems are just as good today as they ever were, Shiela. It's good to see you popping in. I hope you're doing well. :)
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Thanks Tim!! I stop by every so often to find out what my friends are up to. I'm not writing as oft.. read moreThanks Tim!! I stop by every so often to find out what my friends are up to. I'm not writing as often now but am making videos for YouTube - they're fun and another positive outlet for creative ventures!!
Thanks for stopping by to review my poem! It's good to hear from you!!
Anticipation of raging battle pulses through my veins.
When we win we ravage enemies’ riches for our coffer’s gains;
Such bounty seized gives us the power to capture even more.
Warriors sail, invade, and sack to even the bloody score.
WOW!! I love this part, this is wonderful...
enjoyed the read
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
My ancestral journey has had an amazing impact on my life, and on my writing! The discoveries have .. read moreMy ancestral journey has had an amazing impact on my life, and on my writing! The discoveries have been amazing, so it is my intent to share with others to encourage one to know your past, who your ancestors are!
I appreciate your review! Thank you!
1 Year Ago
i dug into mine, found out I'm Itallin, Irish, and dutch and german.. My 8th great grandma was the q.. read morei dug into mine, found out I'm Itallin, Irish, and dutch and german.. My 8th great grandma was the queen of England
I loved the poem dear Sheila. I like myth and tales. The sea, the old Gods and journey. Would of been a grand adventure. Thank you for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Oh, I enjoy the myths and tales too, especially those that speak of our past ancestors! And, yes wh.. read moreOh, I enjoy the myths and tales too, especially those that speak of our past ancestors! And, yes what a grand adventure it would have been, so much so that I carry memory of those times within the spirit of me!!
We are who we are partially because of who they were!
2 Years Ago
I agree my friend. I do believe, real life can become myth and tale.
I think in a past life I may have lived this...I feel it as I read this.
You are a wonder with this form...words so perfectly place into the rhythm and rhyme
of that most interesting time.
j.
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
What a wondrous way to relate to my humble words my friend!
I close my eyes, take a deep bre.. read moreWhat a wondrous way to relate to my humble words my friend!
I close my eyes, take a deep breath and go back in time to the days when our Viking ancestors were master of the seas; though they pillaged and were hungry for power, they held a certain presence that shall never be forgotten by this soul!
I am ever grateful when you take time to stop by my page and review one of my poems!
I haven't seen you here in a long time . . . I've been sketchy . . . and it's great to see you again becuz I'm so forgetful, I don't look for those I never see anymore! This is a well-written epic that brought all kinds of things to mind as I was reading. Of course I love your rhyme & rhythm, but also, I noticed that your line length reminds me of the long journey it is to travel by ship, almost as if you've got us bouncing along these long lines to journey your poem. Another thing is that you put me into the shoes of how it must've been when our world wasn't so over-connected. Now we can barely conceive of approaching an unknown shore & anticipating whatever possible hostilities might be awaiting us like invaders. This poem put me into these shoes & helped me feel how that must've felt. You are an amazing poet I haven't appreciated enuf here at the cafe (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Superb write dear Sheila. Beautiful description, wonderful story. Very much enjoyed this.
Kind regards,
Helena
Posted 3 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Please accept my apology for not thanking you for this review sooner than this day!! I've not been o.. read morePlease accept my apology for not thanking you for this review sooner than this day!! I've not been on The Cafe often enough to appreciate the gracious time given to comment about my humble scribblings! I am always grateful to have you stop by with a review!
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