Reach

about the girl I know who tries to fix everything...

She's crying again,

She's falling into sadness

That isn't even her own.

She just loves too much.

 

She sees her cherised ones

Falling

deep

deep

deep

below,

And she jumps down

Because she wants to catch them.

 

Sharp atmosphere,

Sharp with the truth

That maybe she can't fix everything.

 

But that can't be right.

Her heart just keeps on reaching,

Even if all the rest of her

Melts away.

 

Everyone cries that they're all alone,

But they have her chasing after them.

If she fell into her hopelessness,

Who would jump after her?

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

There are two lines here that need focus:

Sharp atmosphere,
Sharp with the truth
That maybe she can't fix everything.
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Sharp atmosphere,
Sharp with the truth
She can't fix everything.
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Everyone cries that they're all alone,
But they have her chasing after them.
If she fell into her hopelessness,
Who would jump after her?
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Everyone cries when they're all alone,
But they have her chasing after them.
If she fell into her hopelessness,
Who would jump after her?
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Just...a wordage change would clear those areas...
There is a apart here where she does everything...
but no one will do nothing for her if its the same/or situation...
I call that the constant enabler...

[Wynter Page]

Thank you!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...