To Love That Wasn't Good Enough

I never thought that it would end like this

with pain and sorrow

in a winter's morning

drowned by tears in a last goodbye's shadow

 

Yes you were the one for me my world was your embrace

I never thought that you'll be gone and I'll be here so alone

cause you were the only one I ever wanted to be with

live and breath for

 

Every part of me screams your name

this seperation has cut my wings I'm crushing

I can't believe what's left of you

is all that's left for me

 

You said that everything would be alright at the end

you lied again like you always did

another stain in my white dress

another bruice that hurts

 

The floor turned crimson red

my blood pours out of regret

all I ever wanted was you

but I wasn't good enough for you

 

Im going away forever lost

eternal damnation or any cost

anything that would cease the pain in my heart

maybe this time I've gone too far

 

Emptiness is what I feel

the memory of you burns inside

I say a last goodbye to love that betrayed me

to love that wasn't good enough...

 

Reviews

[Catastrophe]

Great write...the emotions are just right there...
you are really good at letting them flow beautifully
amazing job!

[Kitty]

This is so sad, yet so beautiful. I know of the heartach of which you speak of - Not cool!

This is really a great write!!!

Well done!

Josie

P.S Good luck in my contest :)

[Indira]

Pain has no better outlet than words............nicely expressed rather the heart spoke it's story.......Nothing lasts for ever and something that's fake...it's better it goes rather than be with us...

Way to go!!!