Burn

No, I don't smoke. D:

The flame dances before my eyes

Flickers, and my heart starts to rise

Doubt starts talking, My mind says no

But the lighter in my hand wont stop screaming go.

The first is the worst, yet..

It feels so right

I don't know where this is heading tonight

Then the 2nd & 3rd, it's become a game

The urge to keep going just cant be tamed

Then there's the breaking point, do I wanna continue?

It calls to me, and then I don't know what to do

I give it a rest, yet I know in my heart

From now I'm the addict,

And this was just the start.

Reviews

[Solidad]

For writing about something in which you knew nothing about. You faked it quite well =). The only thing I'd have to say is in the being there was a flow and towards the end it seemed like you were forcing the piece to rhyme. Aside from that it was a good read.