Supercell to F5, False Hope

Supercell to F5, False Hope

A Poem by Aries
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here comes the storm

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you are the inevitable gale that uproots
empty bags dust devils and tenuous hope
you are the final violent truth
that scours my soul with blight and smoke
but dizzying still I see your ghost
in passing cars and old parking spots
in empty bedrooms and parking lots
amid rumors that you never left
a high-wind advisory is in effect

© 2017 Aries


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I guess one can experience a good love
and a bad one
the bad one leaves you empty and abused
and the good one fills you with hope

I enjoyed reading this poem
Good job

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aries

7 Years Ago

Hope is a slippery slope.. a little bit will help you through but the disappointment of failure can .. read more

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Added on March 12, 2017
Last Updated on March 12, 2017
Tags: love, heartbreak, false hope, pain, loss, coping, denial, confusion, depression

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Aries
Aries

Corinth, NY



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