Which path to take

Which path to take

A Poem by Darkblushedink
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Destiny needs to be chosen wisely.

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A breeze is blowing,
slow and steady,
and the currents are rushing into my hair,
miles are spreading to destinies,
but which mile to take,
one path, a green dark road,
stretches into a burnt valley,
another path,
a flowery wide path, 
encircled by birds from above the bushes,
reaches to a bustling town,
i can tell the green dark path,
has not an imprint of footprint,
while the flowering path has many,
imprinted on it,
some of knights and soldiers,
others of queens and duchesses,
caravans through centuries have passed this path,
while its neighbor stays unvisited!
Dark and mysterious is the path to the valley,
and cold and lifeless it seems,
but it as well as the flowering path has a unique melody,
it calls me to step on it,
and leave the flowering path for queens,
for it tells me it is the path to my dreams,
it's cold and lifeless,
its dark and wet,
but still produces music,
maybe that's why i'll step on it,
for one beautiful soul can produce art,
but if an ugly one can as well,
than it's a greater magic,
so i call it the magical path,
which i have now stepped on,
i know that in the ashes of the burnt valley,
where my destiny must lead,
i'll find a flower or two,
i'll find new trees growing from the ash,
and i'll hear a song too,
beauty lies in the soul of things,
it lies in what's unique,
a path visited a thousand times,
or a path visited not once,
it lies in the mud and scum of things,
and from there, something always sings!

© 2013 Darkblushedink


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This phrase's nicely penned ...
and leave the flowering path for queens,
for it tells me it is the path to my dreams,
it's cold and lifeless,
its dark and wet,
but still produces music,
maybe that's why i'll step on it,
for one beautiful soul can produce art....great write, once again you did a great job, it's a piece that came from reality but words came from youse heart foresure...
beautifully done, today;s life's a life of running, escaping, hiding, but doing ....
i can compare youse this piece with us, with all human beings life's...cu...z...it's true and realistic one.
well written.100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


Darkblushedink

8 Years Ago

Thankyou sooooooooo much! :)

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Darkblushedink
Darkblushedink

Karachi, Pakistan



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