Judge Me

Judge Me

A Poem by Brandon

You do your thing
I do mine
Lives on different paths
Everything just fine
Words are spoken
Feelings are known
Didn�t want it to be this way
But the first punch has been thrown
Judge me on my life
Judged for what I�ve done
The life that I lead doesn�t suit you
Feel free to run
Because in the end
I�ll do just fine
Do what I set out too
All in due time
You�ll be a memory
A glimpse in my sight
A past you can remember
And how you judged me that night

© 2008 Brandon


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Nicely written, short and sweet. I know it's odd coming from a writer, but sometimes words get in the way and dull the brilliance of a piece. You know what you want to say, and you say it. No rubbish, no filler. I like it very much. Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on April 8, 2008
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Brandon
Brandon

Phoenix, AZ



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Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..

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