Promise

 

It was one day

The day of the school play

I told you about it everyday

You said you would show

When I reminded you

You said “I know”

 

The play just began

Everyone there but you

As the tears ran

I thought what did I do?

There I am staring

Without saying a peep

Promises are like bonds

And something you always keep

Reviews

[Seriana]

Promises broken are a difficult thing sometimes. This was another great piece for you. Good job!

[Lady V]

I enjoyed this poem. It was definately short sweet and to the point. Its unbelivable how many people ruin their character by not keeping a simple promise. Its sad that it happens within the family the most. If you can't trust them than who can you trust???? Good job on this one.


Lady V

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

awww that was great. Sad but it does happen. Broken promises hurt I know but it only makes you a stronger person in the end. Great write.. :D

[Paul Wallace]

What a poem! :)

I like this sad little write. It happens though. If this was something you went through I am sorry you had to go through this.