You

You

A Poem by Brandon

 

You give me the reason

To go on today

Each morning I wake up

And see your precious face

It gives me a smile

Makes me believe

That love is the best thing

That’s happened to me

Going through life

With all of the clatter

Keeping in mind

You are what matters

You brighten my day

You fill me with ease

You essence flows through me

Like a warm summer breeze

You are so perfect

Life is so grand

Just knowing in my heart

That I am your man

 

© 2008 Brandon


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If you have someone special, I hope you shared this poem with her. If it was me, I would have melted in your arms after hearing this. Your really good and writing "love" poems. Most boys are afraid to express their feelings so I hope you let that special someone know exactly how you feel. She will be yours forever if you do. Great work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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If you have someone special, I hope you shared this poem with her. If it was me, I would have melted in your arms after hearing this. Your really good and writing "love" poems. Most boys are afraid to express their feelings so I hope you let that special someone know exactly how you feel. She will be yours forever if you do. Great work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is so beautiful. I love it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the ending. It really raps up the entire poem. It shows that life is worth living just to find that perfect happiness that is only mentioned in fairy tales.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes! Show her, take her to a tree and say this in her ear,
or beneath the moon, eyes to eyes, so she can know this is real.
This poem is absolutely beautiful. Perfect love.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet and beautiful. I enjoyed reading it I really did.

Posted 16 Years Ago


So sweet and well done. very beautiful! i love it! Amber-Leigh

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely! Very optomistic and cute. (: All you need is love~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is a grand feeling. That special someone that can make you smile even if you are standing in a nest of fire ants while a tornado approaches. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww, how cute! Well done -- simple, yet romantic. If you read this to your girl, read it out loud. It has quite an effect. ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 19, 2008

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Brandon
Brandon

Phoenix, AZ



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Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..

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