Rendered Useless

Rendered Useless

A Poem by Brandon

Rendered useless

Left for dead

All of these thoughts

Rush through my head

 

World of pain

Hurts deep inside

Like nails on a chalkboard

Rips through my mind

 

Devastation hits

Dark days arrive

Usually I break through

But these days I hide

 

I've fought my last fight

I've shed my last tear

I'll suffer through it

And give into fear

 

I sit and I hope

That this torture will not last

So I can move on

And rid myself of my past

 

© 2008 Brandon


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This is very well written, I can feel the pain.
People can relate on so many levels with this poem, well done!

Continue the amazing writing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on December 11, 2008
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Brandon
Brandon

Phoenix, AZ



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Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..

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