Blind Date

As I walked toward the door

My heart was making a clatter

I started to sweat

As I felt a pain in my bladder

 

I knocked on the door

As my stomach was in knots

I waited patiently

Maintaining a steady thought

 

Trying not to worry

As well as trying to breathe

This is the moment of truth

What will she think of me

 

There she was

In all of her shine

I was almost speechless

The thought of her being mine

 

Now another started to rise

What does she think of me

Does she like me too

Could it just be

 

We said our hellos

And walked out the door

This started our blind date

But there is still so much more

 

Reviews

[Kelly Catherine.]

I really like it^^ I guess blind dates arn't as scary as people excpect them to be...

[octane143]

Awww, you make me actualy want to go on one! Refreshing to know that a man can get the jitters too before a date! Good writing!

[Seriana]

Hehehe, how cute! Well, I'm not that surprised. You have a gentle way with soft writing, and this is no exception. Can't say I've ever had a blind date, but after reading this, I can imagine what it'd be like! Nice job Brandon. :)

[Star-Born-Soul]

I've had a few, I've never felt more alive. You took me back, so far the first time I read "This is the moment of YOUTH"??? . It was just as fun to read the second time. Thanks for sharing your talent.

[just is]

Aw! This is wonderful
I like this it's sweet and sincere