Our Friend Cycle: Are We Still Friends

Our Friend Cycle: Are We Still Friends

A Poem by Dante
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A poem I wrote regarding a friend.

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Friends we were,
At least for a while.
It was a time that I really enjoyed
But things happened and we moved apart.
I thought that I had lost you forever.
But then, we suddenly became friends again
And our bond was stronger than before.
Time passed and once again,
It seemed as if I had lost you.
And indeed I did,
Only not as I did before.
And as before, as time passed, we became friends again.
Only we never actually stopped being friends.
And as always, our bond grew even more powerful.
But the cycle must continue to repeat itself.
Again, we spoke no more.
And now I wonder...
Will we be friends again...

© 2011 Dante


Author's Note

Dante
This was a quick poem. I just wrote it as it came out at the moment. Some friendships are weird... I didn't try to rhyme. I just wrote my feelings/thoughts... or my happenings on a certain friendship

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I seem to be falling on poems that I feel I can't fairly review xD This poem tells you how it is with no fancy illusions, which I'm sure a lot of people would like. Personally I think anyone can write about their feelings like this, put it in a cool structure and call it poetry. It's not to say it isn't, this is my own personal view. I like that we want to know whether you'll be friends again, since we've seen this cycle of being friends and losing each other.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i love it when that happens....when u right without trying and it comes awsome

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I seem to be falling on poems that I feel I can't fairly review xD This poem tells you how it is with no fancy illusions, which I'm sure a lot of people would like. Personally I think anyone can write about their feelings like this, put it in a cool structure and call it poetry. It's not to say it isn't, this is my own personal view. I like that we want to know whether you'll be friends again, since we've seen this cycle of being friends and losing each other.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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