I am.

I am.

A Poem by Trip
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How a person could be miles away from what he/she desires, but stays true to his/her feelings and doesnt let time or distance or disables to effect his/her love.

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I am the man that can not hear, 
But I still hear your words spoken into my ear.
I am the man that can not see,
But I still turn to be awaken by your beauty.
I am the man that can not feel,
But every where i go, I still feel your touch from ages ago.
I am the man that can not hear, see, and touch,
But no matter what gets in my way of life,

I am the man that will Love.

© 2008 Trip


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Verrrrrrry well written. Each stanza creates a new emotion that poors from it. Great poem.
~Karissa

Posted 15 Years Ago


Pretty and sad. This has a lot of potential, but you might want to beef up your imagery a little with more specific images, that would give your reader (and you!) a deeper connection to whoever it is that you're missing. :-)

Posted 15 Years Ago


This poem sounds nearly like me at the moment...I can't love the one I want since we are apart but I can still feel love's presence in my very essence.
You did an exquisite job, this is well written.

Posted 15 Years Ago


woww.
beautifully said.
very deep.
i loved every word of it.
thanks for posting it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Woo justin you rock, great poem man. Keep it up.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Simply beautiful.
I can really relate to this;
well, in a woman's point of view anyways.
It's how I've been feeling lately, and reading this was really comforting to me.
Wonderfully written, great poem, well done. =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Aww, this is really good! It takes a real man to express who he really is. :) I love how you bring the lines together at the end; it really sums up the poem. Great job!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Trip
Trip

Pville, VA



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Names Justin, or Jay, or Trip. Whatever you feel like calling me. I was born and raised in Va. Never really lived any where else besides where i live now. I love to write. mostly about romance because.. more..

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