Dat New New

I'm going to take this rap game,

and grab it,

and twist into a new kind of trouble.

I'm giong to take this rap game to a whole new level,

you watch me, as you see i'm already to far to be seen.

I've lost my self.

I'm already to crawed up the shelf to even reach myself,

so i pray to you god, please help me.

please come back and please save me.

I'm to far up to even be seen.

but i understand now god, you've taught me.

you've taught me through the mistakes i've seen,

the mistakes i wished would just get washed away from the screen,

cleaned away from all of our brains,

but everyone is to far gone in my rain. my sound, my creation of devestation.

my statidum with me crownd prince, with all my whorpisers down at my knees convinced.

i wash my hands with the sound of cheering,

my turn as knockned at the door, and i'm going open it by the hindges.

i'm going to take this world by the billions. and leave them with nothing but depression and confusion.

Good bye world,

your people are already to confused with the idea of levelism, and for me?

i'm already to achieved to even hear about em. Universe

your people are to stupid to understand these verses.

because i'm am martain baby,

you betta believe in me, cause i believe in you,

cause when i come and pick u up in that martain coupe,

you better believe that we don't drupe by

we fly by....

Author's Note

idk, sick today, thought i would throw something new at ya.

Reviews

[Rya May]

Thanks for reviewing my poem! I thought I'd return the favor. I liked this poem I'm a little ify on what it's about exactly but I like your words and symbolism like the part "i'm going open it by the hinges." That was sweet. Anyways thanks
rm

[Meredith Leigh]

I thought this was cool. The title left me a bit skeptical, but I thought it had a nice ring to it.
I liked the rhyme scheme, and overall I thought it was good. Nice work!

- Kriss