My sweet baby.

My sweet baby.

A Poem by Jamie

If you ever left me I know I'd go insane.
I know my heart would never mend with all that heart-wrenching pain.
Till I meet you I cannot truly see.
A ll I want right now is for you to hold me.
I want to feel your lips pressed tenderly to mine.
I want our bodies to intertwine.
I wish you were standing right before my eyes.
I want to feel you in between my thighs.
I'd love to have us grow old together.
We'll belong to eachother forever.
I hope you know how much you mean to me.
You've completed me, even though when you found me I was like a hollow shell. Alone and empty.
With love like ours, so strong,
It makes me think nothing can ever go wrong.
Why are you so far away? This just isn't fair.
I just want to hold you, like your my little teddy bear.
I tell the truth and that's no lie.
I don't ever want to say 'Goodbye'.
My patience is wearing thin. I canot wait.
I need to be with my soulmate.
In a sad and pleading way,
This is all I have to say;
Please don't ever leave me.
I love you my sweet baby.

© 2009 Jamie


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Very sweet ! I love how you allways... in all of your pieces you but your heart and sould into your writing ! There is no wall between you and you readers... I have trouble with this ! Again... another amazing read ! Continue writing and I have a feeling that one of these days you will become a very well known author !

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Longing for a love that can't ever be... A relationship that you knew would never be, holding tight to a teddybear... it shows your integrity. You have grown up to only know men who are users, that's too bad. There are men out there that really care and have compassion. Keep writing, it's your savior... ks

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is such a sweet poem! I loved it soo much! I actually agree with Stargazer! Hopefully I will be able to see your books of poetry on a shelf on a library or a bookstore! :] Till then, I'd love to see more of your poems on this website!

Posted 14 Years Ago


i read it
i didnt like it
but it is written well
and i can see why people would like it
because it is a nice poem

~R.M.~



Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very sweet ! I love how you allways... in all of your pieces you but your heart and sould into your writing ! There is no wall between you and you readers... I have trouble with this ! Again... another amazing read ! Continue writing and I have a feeling that one of these days you will become a very well known author !

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 20, 2009

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