Everything Down

Everything Down

A Poem by Hmhmhm
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I won't let you stop and think
Your weary mind won't ever shrink.
I promise you,
With all the things I do,
I will never let you fall
Or ever lose it all.
You think I don't care,
But you words fly in the air.
You can't tell me the same.
With out say, "This is why I came.
I love you, but I can't stay.
It's nothing you say,
It's nothing you do,
I just cannot tell how much.
Though i might be afraid and such.
We can work this out.
But all we do is scream & shout.
You love seeing me cry,
So darling please let me die.
I do believe you cared
But you left me so scared.
 

© 2009 Hmhmhm


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I love it. Absolutely great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow, really great poem...
It was really deep and expressed really well, and your rhyming just added to it.
Awesome piece :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Did you write this? It's amazing. Seriously.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on December 19, 2009

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