I Love You, I Need You, I Miss You

I Love You, I Need You, I Miss You

A Poem by Jill Wallflower
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Love poem, sad again...

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You make me smile and laugh

You make me frown and cry

If only you knew what you were capable of

You break my heart and fix it, all with certain words.

‘I love you’ and it’s whole

‘She’s my best friend’ and it breaks

I just wish I could be more

Your words can build me up and break me down

Yet you can never know how I feel

You will only ever know the friendship I feel for you

I love you

I miss you

I need you

© 2011 Jill Wallflower


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I have encountered this before. Recently too. This has a lovely sense of melancholy and raw emotion. I love this piece because it can be related to my life at the moment. This is fantastic work!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can totally relate to this, the pain of not being able to be what you want to the person you love,
Great write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWWWW SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wonderful Write!!!!

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Jill Wallflower
Jill Wallflower

Sydney, Australia



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I'm Jill 16 Christian :) Bisexual Yeah, I know they disagree but you can't choose who you become Music is my life... Northie, The Never Ever, Dear Dearest, Call The Shots, Because They Can.. more..

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