Never Alone

Never Alone

A Poem by xfallen5oldierx
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Simple piece i wrote awhile back.

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I walked a lonely road.
One that seemed to never end.
I thought I was alone.
Abandoned by the people I called Family.

Now I see the light.
My Family is not of blood.
But of bonds made in life.

I may be abondonded by blood.
I will never be abondoded.
By the pack.

© 2012 xfallen5oldierx


Author's Note

xfallen5oldierx
Let me know how it is, critism accepted.

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I like the way this was written. It's a tad sad, but honest to its core. Kudos to you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nicely done. All realizations are profound in their own right. A wonderful piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


So cool! I love how you wrote this, and stated that family is more than blood. True, very true.

Posted 11 Years Ago


oooo i like it makes me thing of wolfs :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this a lot, sometimes this is a very true thing, it is well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this. Short and sweet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 29, 2012
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xfallen5oldierx
xfallen5oldierx

Watertown, SD



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