I Don't Miss You At All

This is a poem I made for my friend when she and her boyfriend broke up. Basically she was a normal girl who dated a nice emo boy who shunned her after his friends found out.

Shy and innocent
That's what we were
I wanted our friendship
to extend far

You liked me
I liked you
We laughed
We cooed

They torn us apart
At the hips, we were
Once love was now hate
Crying wasn't the cure

We both parted
One last moment we kissed
I miss you now
Perhaps that's why I'm so pissed

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Ima]

WOW!!!
if i gather it correctly i presume you are talking about friends who became something more than friends =/
it is simple yet elegant piece of writing
you convey the hurt so easily its actually heartbreaking
Good job !!