Spilt Milk and Cable Cars

I am spilt milk

and cable cars

 

I am crashing, rusted seams

screeching and fumbling at the halt

 

I am the follower of weaving, wavering lines

others drew so I would stay on time

 

I am to be filled to the brim with soulful people

with blank faces only to deliver them to their destinations

 

I am not

to be cried over.

Reviews

[Jonathan Ballam]

I love the powerful ending! It's always tough to find an ending that works.

There's a honesty in simplicity, says I.

Keep scribbling :)

[Muse]

Intelligent and witty. I can feel the sarcasm in my joints. It bruised my ego and left me speechless, thank you for that.

[Angi]

I think she is one tough chick! I like how she clearly states that she is not to be cried over. Even if the world isn't offerind such a smooth ride. Well done! Angi~

[Zach Knox]

the feel I get from this is that you are used and tossed aside without care. very depressing feel to it I like how you do it this is I'd say the favorite one from the ones I have read from you so far.