NaTUrAL

NaTUrAL

A Poem by The Waterlily Pad
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Random. Just thought I should make a general poem in dedication to natural causes in life.

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A hesitation,
A confusion,
A mind of uneasy proportion,
A mild response,
A sad decline,
A rude.
Mean.
Manipulative
Thought.


Tightly wrapping my brain..


A pang of realisation
A anger undepriable,
A sensation undeniable,
A love unconditional,
A ego unbeatable,
A streak of selfish desires,
A madness of lust for liars,
A intention of guilty consciousness.



Heart cravings remain restless.


A mask of God's given spirit.
So don't try to
Turn your back on Mother Nature,
She will find you
Acting on your best behaviour,
Slyly making a life of danger.


Simple lives
Are for simple people
Who make
simple
Demands.

© 2015 The Waterlily Pad


Author's Note

The Waterlily Pad
Nothing serious.

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ahhh yes and all of it - yes all of it is within us - they say the sooner we accept that we have all of the aforementioned as a part of us we can begin to observe it and move past it and know a state of bliss

nice random thoughts you were having here .. I like I like X

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Waterlily Pad

8 Years Ago

Glad to hear of your thoughts!



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I do like the repetition in this piece (A). As this is one of the major traits of free verse poetry. The same as I write and love to read as there is so much freedom to it.

This was a thought provoking piece and I could sense you had all these thoughts going on and you penned them to paper. I have a feeling you enjoyed writing this piece very much, as I enjoyed reading it

Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Waterlily Pad

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your support :)
ahhh yes and all of it - yes all of it is within us - they say the sooner we accept that we have all of the aforementioned as a part of us we can begin to observe it and move past it and know a state of bliss

nice random thoughts you were having here .. I like I like X

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Waterlily Pad

8 Years Ago

Glad to hear of your thoughts!

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Added on July 5, 2015
Last Updated on July 5, 2015
Tags: Life, nature, random, feelings, natural, love, hate, confusion, anger, restless, heart, cravings, desires, lusts

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The Waterlily Pad
The Waterlily Pad

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