Crave For Attention

You took advantage of
My innocence; kissed away
By; your hungry lips
I succumbed to; curiosity for
The unspoken; is a secret
About; private moments shared
Behind closed doors; we are
Different, inconsistent acts
Becomes confusing; to keep track of
Emotions and doubt; leaves me screaming for
Attention; acknowledge me!

Author's Note

Okay, so this one might be tricky to read.
That's why I made another version of how it can/supposed to be read.

You took advantage of my innocence
My innocence kissed away by your lips
Your lips I succumbed to
I succumbed to curiosity for the unspoken
The unspoken is a secret about private moments shared
Private moments shared behind closed doors
Behind closed doors we are different.
Inconsistent acts becomes confusing to keep track of
To keep track of emotions and doubt leaves me screaming for attention.
Attention! Acknowledge me!

Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

The affection, and attention, should be equal in front or behind the door.

Enjoyed this immensely, wonderful writing.