The bridge

Just me writing free style

The jump would free me
From bullies, mean teachers
And preps at school
But I'm too worried
That if i do it
Too soon
I will leave my only
Friend
And Family
Or
If i do it too late
I will be to scared
From society
And the things they will say
Like stupid and weak
Yesterday I tired
But today will be the day
The last day
I will think of it
Again

Author's Note

Don't Worry I'm not depressed. I just like to write stories that are sad.

Reviews

[Poetry Road]

I like this a lot. You have a great voice for the teen angst that we all have gone through. Think of crossing the bridge on your path to adulthood, rather than as a "jumping off point" because the journey is difficult. I think this piece is very good and very accessible for people your age. Good job.

[Davidgeo]

Buy a parachute. A real fancy slim one that that just looks like a weird backpack oddly strapped you can wear all the time... then you at least have an out if you're having second thoughts on the way down. (I know we're not being serious here)