Some Dreams Are Just Too Impossible

Some Dreams Are Just Too Impossible

A Poem by Natalia
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"Sadness is not simply an emotion, it's a pain."

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Sadness is not simply an emotion, it's a pain.

It rumbles in your stomach, roiling and brewing.

Its hurts and makes you want to throw up,

Throw up all the pain and flush it down the toilet.

If only it was that easy…

 

I don't even know how to make this pain disappear.

It comes from a longing, an obsession, that seems impossible to achieve.

I wish I could throw up the pain that sits in my stomach like cement.

Like the way I throw up that blueberry vodka that I drink to forget why I hurt.

© 2014 Natalia


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Blueberry vodka.....:) that really give serious hangover... Good job I enjoyed and smile

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natalia

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
You use some strong imagery and words. But (and this may just be a personal preference), I dislike the prose feel... It is like reading two paragraphs rather than two stanzas in a poem. However, your ideas and expression are remarkable.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natalia

6 Years Ago

Thanks for reading :)

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Added on February 13, 2014
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Tags: #pain, #sadness, #hope, #broken, #dreams, #impossible, #achievement

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Natalia
Natalia

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Hi, my name is Natalia and I'm 2o years old. I am a college student in and live in Virginia near Washington D.C. I absolutely love love love music, reading, writing, movies, drawing, and especially tr.. more..

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