Something to think about

Something to think about

A Poem by timthy
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the title says it all

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Each day as I  abruptly wake
      To the howl of alarm clock's breath
Engulfed by bad news, for goodness sake
      Thankful to be one day closer to death
As you watch a world in chaos
      Captured on the morning news
You have to wonder  about all the loss
      No matter of your views
While you enjoy your java
      Someone is being slain
Like molten is to lava
       History repeats itself again
People live  with tunnel vision
       Content  with  life's  tradition
Accepting of  all derision
        Such a pitiful  human condition
Are  we all victims of circumstance
        Or products of the environment
Do we sit it out or dance
        Or figure out our placement
Sometimes I view my death
       As my divine achievement
A welcoming of my last breath
      With no need of bereavement
Are we as a culture
      So mentally deranged
Like the swarming of the vulture
       Above the carcass  of the estranged
Atop  the highest mountain
       I would emphatically proclaim
Like water from a fountain
       Spilled out with waterfalls of shame
We are all in this together
      So stoic ,yet devout 
So many storms we've left to weather
      And just something to think about...

        

© 2014 timthy


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timthy
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Most of what we see and hear is out of our control. the world evolves at it's own rate.
We have to be content that we give out children a better advantage to make changes.
Yes we are lucky to live where we do. Very few of us can make any impact on the world.
If all we have are the words we write then we must be content in that. Some one, perhaps just one person, will read them and start to think, maybe start a string of events that might make some small change.
Just keep writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Most of what we see and hear is out of our control. the world evolves at it's own rate.
We have to be content that we give out children a better advantage to make changes.
Yes we are lucky to live where we do. Very few of us can make any impact on the world.
If all we have are the words we write then we must be content in that. Some one, perhaps just one person, will read them and start to think, maybe start a string of events that might make some small change.
Just keep writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The human condition we would all rather not think about i was watching the youtube news on liberia what a hell hole that is we live in a much beter place insulated from most of the worlds carnage i dont thing i would want to know it all

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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timthy
timthy

coloniial heights, VA



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