Purifying

Purifying

A Poem by Dominic

When
will 
it
be
safe
to 
come
out?
I know!
One tiny increment at a time
One small leaning
one shuffle
one daring
one faith
one experiment
when no one is looking
maybe at night
when no one is awake
when we can try
just try
maybe together
maybe we'll hold hands
maybe it will be fine
Maybe we'll meet lots of nice people

© 2011 Dominic


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One step at a time. This is good!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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. wow ...
. i seriously think that all the nice people
should make it easier to be found ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its getting and better to feel that safety...but scary as well

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 31, 2011
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Dominic
Dominic

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