The exception of love

The exception of love

A Poem by TheActOfRandomness(:
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[Verse 1]

I fallen before

But I've landed on my knees, scarred

I promised myself that I wouldn't fall again

Wouldn't write again

Of love

 

But then you come around

Pick me right off of the ground

And make me fall again

Even after I promised myself

But i did

 

[Chorus]

So now I'm writing of love

And you are the only exception

I promised myself

But you are my exception

And without you, I can't find my way

Because you,

Are my only exception, of love

 

[Verse 2]

You hold my heart, right in your hand

And I melt through your hand like grains of sand

All falling through

Just for you

Oh, you

 

And then you give me that smile

You make my life worth while

And even after I promised myself

I've fallen again

And I write this song, of love

 

[Chorus repeat]

[Bridge]

(La,la, my exception)

I never thought it would be you

I never thought I'd be writing again

I never thought I'd fall

But you are my exception

My direction

My ocean, my sea

I am the flower, you are my bee

Without you, there is no me

 

And now I can't forget, can't stop

Writing of love

 

[Chorus Repeat]

 

© 2009 TheActOfRandomness(:


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Yo, Cheeky, IT'S AMAZING!!!
You do so much better at songs, no offence! I love you poetry, too. It's just that your songs fit you more!
And I would listen to all of your songs day, night, afternoon, morning, if I'n ina coma, and if when I'm dead I'll have them set a cd player on my grave and play them!! =)
You and Ms.Perfectionist better not forget us when you guys are famous!!
-Coco Carol!! =)


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Yo, Cheeky, IT'S AMAZING!!!
You do so much better at songs, no offence! I love you poetry, too. It's just that your songs fit you more!
And I would listen to all of your songs day, night, afternoon, morning, if I'n ina coma, and if when I'm dead I'll have them set a cd player on my grave and play them!! =)
You and Ms.Perfectionist better not forget us when you guys are famous!!
-Coco Carol!! =)


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! I would most definately listen to this all the time!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a sweet song.. so much can come from the inspiration of love.. it is the one emotion we all fail to hide from for long.. I loved the message contained.. so fresh and youthful.. and full of yearning! Whomever you wrote it for is very lucky.. to have a song written for them. Thank you so much for sharing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

is this a song? cuz if it is i would listen to it day and night!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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