A Poem by TheActOfRandomness(:


I froze when I saw your name

My heart raced 100 miles per hour

I knew my heart wouldn't couldn't be the same

With you not even 20 feet away

If only I could gain the courage

Just to say hello

Instead of being frozen in fear

With my heart going crazy

Wondering if you would say hi back

Or ignore my words

Would you give me a chance

Or would you give me the cold shoulder?

But I gotta become strong

If I never talk,

I will never have the chance

I gotta become unfrozen.


© 2009 TheActOfRandomness(:

Author's Note

I can't stay frozen forever, no matter how nervous I am. /: <3

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Awww, Cheeky, any guy would be lucky to have you!
And if any ever hurt you, Martin and me have a certain crime that Ms. Perfectionist would have to help us hide!
I like you're new picture!

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well expressed write here!
Wonderful emotions protrayed!

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think many people can relate to this poem.
I liked the emotion and imagery.
Good write. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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