Never the same.

Never the same.

A Poem by TheActOfRandomness(:
"

Its hard when friends grow apart

"

We were the best of friends

Almost inseprable, I may say

But thats kinda diffrent now

We're going seprate ways.

Two roads in diffrent paths

And I'm going the other way

I don't think we'll be back

We'll never be the same.

You say I'm changing

But you're the one who changed

Desprate for attention

Big Headed by fame.

Two roads in a diffrent direction

And I'm going the other way

I don't think we'll be back

We'll never be the same.

 

 

© 2009 TheActOfRandomness(:


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I'm wondering if this was written for a particular friend or a group of friends, or just the idea of losing friends....Hm...Anyway, it was a really good poem. I think ur flow went nicely, but got a little sticky in the longer lines. Your repetition is actually really good, though. I really liked it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww, Sky, it was so sad!
I love it!
It kind of reminds me of this one poem I wrote when a friend and I grew apart. =(
I hate when that happens.
I liked how you repeated the lines at the end!
Great job! =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked the repetition of the beginning of the poem at the end, it just reiterated how you felt about losing your friend. Nice job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm sorry for the lose of your friend. I know it's little consolation, but nice peace.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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