Unfolding

Sit, lets unfold this origami mess

Don't worry about the signs of distress

I just wish to find within these pink clouds

What exactly it is that rumbles so loud

As if it could think for itself

The complex maze of its health

Don't say a word, and just let me find

Exactly what it is that you hide inside your mind

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know my friend. Sometimes, hidden secrets need to be kept dead. I liked the drive and the want of the words. Some folks hide secrets, because they must. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

You are very right my friend, some secrets must be kept, there is always a motive behind why secrets are swept deep into ones mind. Thank you for reading

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. I have many. On occasion, they can sneak out into my poetry. You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

A good title and poem. Has some mystery to it.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Well thank you, the mind is the biggest mystery of this world.

[Sami Khalil]

I agree. You are welcome sir.