Eyes

I knew it was getting worse,

when I can't look you directly in the eye

afraid that you will notice

how they drained the life out of me

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

A very strong emotive poem, Yuarian. Writing is a very powerful tool that helps calm and ease the soul. It's a gift that one should always cherish and allow it to grow within them. Never be afraid to speak and share your words. And the great thing about writing is the more you do it the sharper you become. You'll even begin to see the world differently. So keep on creating poetry and sharing with the world. CLE

[yuarian]

Thank you for the kind words:) I am not a pro in writing poems so I appreciate you so much :)))