Ending

Ending

A Story by Zi

You’re magical

 

Thanks, I guess

 

But seriously, I distinctly remember

 

And I know remembering isn’t something you always do

 

You were there

 

And Jim

 

But mostly you

 

And you

 

There was me

 

And Oren too

 

And that guy, Jared, yeah

 

And a whole bunch of other people

 

And a band

 

Three bands really

 

Well, two bands and a guy

 

But my point stands 

 

What was that again?

 

Seriously?

 

Something to do with the word “us”, yeah?

 

There isn’t an “us”, that’s the point

 

Is it?

 

No more Zen. I want to know what you actually think

 

Do you?

 

No. not any more

© 2011 Zi


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I love it :) Format is amazing

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh boy... That's brilliant! Your writing is outstanding!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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