Damages

Damages


All women are damaged by men
cursed with a body of sin
condemned by a devil with a broken grin
haunted by him

she paints on eye shadow and blush
we take rape and crush
we take her love
rape her body
and crush her soul
we met our goal
placed our chaos into her black hole
and we abandon the toll

She loved my pain
loved her reign
blood stained
mundane scared vein

I hate to enter my sins in
with too many emotions to swim in
All men are damaged by Women

--Z.Silas Herrera

Reviews

[S. P. Vaporis]

men and women hurt eachother before, now, and later. this is dark and i think confused but the confusion adds to the fact that thats how relationships are. confusing. ~peace~

[Chelsea L. Ellsworth]

one part of understands it and the other part doesn't. hehe.. It makes me confused^.^ I like it though^.^

[Alex]

good work ,sad but good .....

[October]

Very powerful and well written.
Thanks for sharing.

[Touché Armada]

I cant say I disagree, but really all people are damaged by people one way or another.
And entering in without emotion, yeah that will get you burned, women tend to know and are not willing to be hurt like that. Both women and man are not toys, this read like the classic cat using the mouse as a toy, in the end they will kill it but why not have a little fun first,,,,, who knows what they think, perhaps they tink it might be a while before they catch another so decide to make the most of their thrill.