Women

You are not the punchline to a random statement

You are not to be undermined by the ill mind

You are not the missing piece of the puzzle set up by the rest

And alas, you are not the problem, it is the society

You search for a place called serenity

Do not seek for it within the souls of others

For you have always carried a divine place within yourself which is the serenity you seek

You are a woman who can build it yourself

You are molded to build.

Reviews

[zahidarizvi]

oh thanks a lot for the feedback i was wondering there was something missing when i drafted it..i'l look in to it.

[James Whitefall]

I like the idea of this writing, but I do wish there was some metaphor here. I feel like it would make it better and allow for deeper emotions to come through. Thanks for the read.