Lovebird

Lovebird

A Poem by zainul

Doctor and patient


Are two wings of a lovebird


Crippled bird can't fly

© 2012 zainul


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Oh, this is wonderfully layered :) I have never thought of the balance between a doctor and patient in terms of the balance you presented it, a thoughtfulness a level higher up than people would normally draw the comparison. Smartly done, thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

I feel very blessed and honored and by your thoughtful review,Sarah Khalil.:)
Thanks for stopp.. read more



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Interesting comparison. Great Haiku :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you Eileen.
You inspire me so much!
so wise really! I liked the idea and the way you express it! you are so good in choosing the right words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you for the inspiring review.

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zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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