Magnolia

Magnolia laments

As mistletoe smothers it

Gardener forgot love

Reviews

[nyla bass]

this is my favorite Zainul, as the Magnolia is my home state flower (Louisiana), and I have loved the beautiful blooms all of my life.
this Haiku speaks to me of the Seasons... of the transformation from
Spring into Winter-- too late the heedless Gardener (better luck
next year!) Thanks for sharing this.

[zainul]

Hi Nyla,
Hope you are doing well.
I am very sorry that I missed your wonderful review.read moreHi Nyla,
Hope you are doing well.
I am very sorry that I missed your wonderful review.
I am very pleased to learn that Magnolia is your home state flower.
I must appreciate your leaders with real love and passion for beauty of Magnolia.
Would you please inform me in which months you have blooms of this flower?
Could you also what management practices are followed for Magnolia?
Hope to hear from you soon?

[Prritiy]

Wow, its wonderful in literal sense and figurative too.

[zainul]

Thanks,dear.:)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)
good night :)

[zainul]

Have a nice sleep.:)

[Prritiy]

:) you too, thanks

[zainul]

:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Magnolia]

Lovely poem zainul...thought I would include this haiku I wrote last year :)


Pink petals unfurl

picture of pure perfection

sweet magnolia

Maggie © 2012

:))

[zainul]

Thanks for sharing your great piece.:)
I can imagine its beauty even without the picture.
read moreThanks for sharing your great piece.:)
I can imagine its beauty even without the picture.
You may post it now.

Thanks for the compliments and lovely review of my piece.

[Magnolia]

Glad you liked it :))

[zainul]

:))

[Kenneth The Poet]

He clearly did, yet the beautiful non-poison is smothered out by beautiful poison like the kiss of death. Is that not love, I wonder. Of your best, zainul!

[zainul]

Thank you Kenneth for the admiring review.
Yes,it is also a kind of love.
Thanks for looking at that aspect of love.
I am extremely sorry for not being able to respond to your amazing review 6 months back

[Androglossia]

The magnolia has long been associated with beauty and the mistletoe traditionally as sexual symbol in ancient Celtic Druids. Your poem denotes a monotonous life where people were blinded by routines and forget that love is just in corner waiting to be plucked. While routine gives some comfort and security, it sometimes gets too comfortable and leads to a lack of action.

Great work!

[zainul]

I am blessed by such a lovely review.
Thanks a lot,Maryanne.

[Androglossia]

You're very welcome!

[Rory Peace]

Short, sweet and full of meaning. My kind of poem.

[zainul]

Thanks a lot,Rory for your admiring review.
I feel proud that my poem matches your kind.

[afra]

short but deep ....good work

[zainul]

Thanks,Afra.
Your review is very inspiring.

[afra]

welcome sir

[zainul]

You are always welcome.

[Blue Ivory]

Simple and beautiful...

This will be on my mind for the rest of the day :)

[zainul]

Thank you,Siren.
I feel honored.

[Blue Ivory]

It's refreshing to find someone from my country writing so nicely :)

[zainul]

Thank you Siren.
I have found a talented person like you who is also hailed from my country.

[Blue Ivory]

:)

[zainul]

(^_^)

[Shari Vaudo]

Aaaawww. Sad, but beautiful.

[zainul]

Thank you, Shari.
Your review has depicted my personal sadness.

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Nice metaphors. Magnolia blossoms are stunning and so expansive, like youth love sometimes.

[zainul]

Thank you Cristina for the lovely review.