Missed Call

Innocent girls are robbed of their treasures by cheaters using mobile phones

The story started with a missed call.
The mobile phone showed a number,
Which the girl could not remember at all.
She thought for hours and fell in slumber.

After a sound sleep she dialed the caller.
A male voice replied from the other end.
She asked him why he called her,
The man said he wanted to make her friend.

Then the story took a different turn.
New hope was born in the mind of the virgin.
She loved the man and started to yearn
For marriage and  eloped beyond the known margin.

Soon a new story floated in the air,
The girl was cheated and wandered everywhere.

Author's Note

Based on a true story where the victim was a virgin

Reviews

[zainul]

Here is another example where virgins have been molested by the so called teachers:

http://usnews.nbcnews.com/_news/2012/10/05/14235370-prosecutors-nj-teachers-had-sexual-relations-with-students-colleagues-covered-it-up

[Kayli]

This is so tragic yet beautifully worded. It definitely made me think. Fantastic write.

[zainul]

Thank you Kayli for your admiring review.
Yes,this is a case of concern.
We have to think how to make our children and little girls more conscious about relationship in modern time.

[Tate Morgan]

Sadly we see this alot in the west Fewer in the east.But men are predatory.I saw a girl witrh a little child sitting on the side of the road the other day

[zainul]

Thank you Tate for your compassionate feeling.Yes,in most cases men are predatory.However,such incidents might be less in number if the girls would consult with their parents or elders before taking such decisions.
In most cases relationships created through mobile phones, internet, social networks and e-mails finally end with undesired events.

[Southern Cross]

Sent chills down my spin..exploitation of women no matter the individuals age ( be it virgin bodies or mind) is to be abhorred. Thank you for writing about it with such insight

[zainul]

Thanks for the abhorrence against the exploitation of women.
This will help them to be careful about the tricks like date rapes played to victimize them.

[Carly Rose]

Tragically beautiful

[zainul]

Oh,your review touched the core of my heart.
Thank you very much.
Also thank you for reviewing my work before I reviewed yours.
I checked your works and found a story.
I am comfortable with poems.
But,I will review your story too.
Warm welcome in this awesome site.

[Rhianne Ney]

A lot of teenagers sometimes face teenage pregnancy... this is a good poem
100/100
Keep writing, Mr. Zainul

[zainul]

Thank you Rhianne for exposing the cruel reality.
We have to find a way to save the girls from such exploitation.

[Rhianne Ney]

That's right (:

[zainul]

Thanks a lot

[Morning Star (SJA)]

You have a unique style of writing and poetry. Very well written.

[zainul]

Thank you for the great compliments and wonderful review.

[Pax]

very short tale that speak volume of reality of today. Yes, I've heard of stories like this, very frightening and sad at times..great write!

[zainul]

Thanks for taking time to tell how frightening the situation now.
What do you think about the remedy in the context of the reality of today?
Thanks for your precious review.

[Victoria Elizabeth]

thats so sad!!!!

[zainul]

Thank you for the inspiring review.

[Victoria Elizabeth]

no promblem

[MOON]

Sad , many similar stories around the world . Technology both a blessing and a curse . Creating a self aware society and open nurturing environment for children might be an answer. Good write as usual.

[zainul]

Nicely said that technology both a blessing and a curse.Victims are all around the world.Yes, I agree that creating a self aware society and open nurturing environment for children might be an answer.But,do you think it is easy?
Thanks for your admiring review.