Mosaic

Inspired by the beauty of mosaic

Mosaic is a form of art
It can easily charm your heart
You can see mosaic on your floor
Broken stone and glass make its core

Mosaic embrace buildings like flowers
You can look at their beauty for hours
Some leaves may give you pleasant surprise
With artistic mosaic on them like golden prize
But I like to tell the truth for knowledge of  all
Those leaves are diseased and destined to fall

The other day I walked to a lofty roof for fun
Pleasant air played with me as children run
I looked at the sky and saw mosaic there
Fluffy cloud and blue of sky made them with care
Suddenly my eyes turned towards the land
Mosaics of  flowers and greens  made lovely stand
I thought it  a map of gifted state
Where people lived happy and wished great

Memories of  past events came as mosaic
It was like a movie mixed with truth and fake
The beauty of mosaic touched everything
The treasure of nature made me sing

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

Mosiac is such a magical work of art!

You have pieced together and crafted with your very own hands your very own Mosiac masterpiece a work of art only, made up of your beautiful poetic words.
This is a wonderfully penned piece and your words and I love how your words
take up the shape of a vase. Bringing this piece alive on the page.

Mosaic is a form of art
It can easily charm your heart
You can see mosaic on your floor
Broken stone and glass makes its core

This stanza speaks volumes to me and excites me to my very core.. making me read your amazing poem over and over again. I too have fond memories when I lived in Barcelona and visited the amazing work of one of the worlds greatest architects that ever lived who dedicated his life to producing such beautiful works of art which is evident to see in the beautiful City that is Barcelona..... ANTONI GAUDI.

Thank you for sharing and bringing my memories back alive again... :o)

[zainul]

Dear friend,
It is a great honor for me to have such passionate words for the piece.
Yes,I engaged my whole heart and soul trying to depict the piece on mosaic.
But,I could not imagine that it would stir the hearts of so many in this site.
I have little words to reciprocate to your generous deliberations.
Thanks a lot for the favor,dear friend.
Best regards,
Zainul

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your welcome .... :O)

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure :O)

[written in blood]

creativity at it's best, this was very enjoyable to read!! I happen to love mosaic myself!!! your pattern was mosaic proved the Artist in you!! great job!!

[zainul]

You have a very generous heart to inspire others by your admiring review.
Thanks a lot for your lovely comment.
This means a lot for me.

[written in blood]

my pleasure!! :-)

[zainul]

:-)

[Yasmin]

I like this poem a lot.
I am an Arab and we know mosaics very well and I've read many poems about mosaics but this is my all time favorite. My favorite part is the end, simply amazing. and this part as well :
"Mosaic embrace buildings like flowers
You can look at their beauty for hours
Some leaves may give you pleasant surprise
With artistic mosaic on them like golden prize
But I like to tell the truth for knowledge of all
Those leaves are diseased and destined to fall"

Beautiful!
Keep up the good work
Well done :)

[zainul]

Thank you Yasmin for stopping by to grace this piece :)
I feel very blessed by your admiring review.
Could you share about some specific cases of mosaic that you have experienced ?
Hope to hear from you soon.

[Yasmin]

It was my pleasure
I would love to share few with you but they are all written in Arabic and I believe translating them wouldn't show their beauty
Thank you for an amazing poem

[zainul]

Thank you Yasmin for the favor.
Please send the Arabic texts and relevant photos to my email id- [email protected]
I like to enjoy your important findings.

[WhiteWillow]

Amazing to think that such an art form can be found everywhere, if you look hard enough...or perhaps merely paying attention to the world around you. Your mosaic of words is art itself. A pleasure to read.

[zainul]

I thank you from the core of my heart for the admiring review.
In fact,this is really a surprise for me that I could view mosaic everywhere.
It is your generosity that you appreciated my imagination.
Thanks for getting pleasure from reading the piece.

[Rogue]

Colorful glass shards arranged together. A myriad of words woven together. A canvas rendering in the minds eye where the paints all flow together. Life can be a beautiful thing when we open our eyes to all around us.

A lovely and descriptive piece.

[zainul]

I am sorry, Rogue for responding after 6 days of your review.
Your review created a lovely picture with amazing words.
This picture shows your power of expression and the beauty of your heart that knows how to appreciate.
I am very honored by your precious review and generous compliments.

[Hime_Chan]

What a lovely piece, such beautiful imagery. I really loved the flow of this piece as well. The ending is my favorite part, very powerful.

[zainul]

I am very pleased to read your admiring review.
It means a lot to me.

[Debbie_Philly]

I love Mosaic's..... so so beautiful... I am mesmerized by them.... as I am with your poem... lovely write !! :)

[zainul]

I am very glad to learn that you are mesmerized by the piece.
I have little words to reciprocate your nice gesture.
Thanks for stopping by,lovely poet!

[ms. barrie]

Memories of past events came as mosaic
It was like a movie mixed with truth and fake
The beauty of mosaic touched everything
The treasure of nature made me sing

--- zainul, this is such an enlightening, poem, enriched with amazing profoundness, while weaving celebrating the splendour of nature. wonderful choice of words, as well as flow. A very delightful read! - 100 to 100 -- Please Pen on :))

[zainul]

Dear Barrie,
I am so delighted to have 100 out of 100 that I can't express my joy.

read moreDear Barrie,
I am so delighted to have 100 out of 100 that I can't express my joy.

You always inspired me by your generous words.
This time too you maintained the same gesture.
Thanks for the nice compliments and wonderful review.

[ms. barrie]

You are very welcome, zainul, 'tis a wonderfully delightful poem, enlightening as usual and i always have a smile upon my face, reading/visiting your poems :)
Remember you as well,your words have done the same for me, looking forward to reading any new writings that any ink drops happen to fall from your pen!
Namaste :))

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure, dear friend.
I must declare that most members of the community of writers in this network are very supportive to one another.This is a desirable characteristic for growing and moving together in a spirit of friendship.
Specially,I adore you for the love you cherish for me in your heart.
I don't really have adequate words to reciprocate your love for me.
Cheers!

[ms. barrie]

:)) Dear Poet...as i adore your lovely soul, as well as your writings. besides, what are words without actions to back them up? Cheers to you as Well...I hope you've been well (too) -- Happy Writings, zainul :))

[zainul]

Happy Writings, Barrie :))

[ms. barrie]

Thank you zainul! Take care :)))

[zainul]

Take care,my dear friend :)))

[ms. barrie]

You too, Dear Poet :)))

[Moniba]

Wonderfully written with a beautiful idea behind it. I liked the concept, and the sudden turn the poem took when you wrote "Those leaves are diseased". A joy to read.

[zainul]

I appreciate your amazing review, Moniba.
You have identified nicely how the the poem took a sudden turn.
I am glad that that the poem brought you joy.
Thanks for the great favor.