Confusion

Confusion causes impasse

Confusion haunts me

Throws me to states of impasse

Seek escape in vain

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, the impasse...have felt that state...and can't remember the capital...


if our mind could think in shorter terms, like "three lines"

that would be a good thing...

we may be less confused.

i really like this piece...so much said in such few words--love senyru.

you do it well.

jacob

[zainul]

This is a very lovely review,Jacob.
It has enlightened me and inspired me immensely.
I always said that your love and trust enabled me to write pieces.
I am very grateful for your amazing compliments.

[I, Rene]

yes, yes it sure does, wonderful Zainul.

[zainul]

Thanks for the very inspiring review.
It means a lot to me.

[Debbie_Philly]

Wonderful Haiku Zainul !!! Great work !! :)

[zainul]

Thank you Debbie for the inspiration.
This means a lot to me.

[Debbie_Philly]

Your very welcomed !!! :)

[zainul]

:)

[Hayley]

So much said in so few words.. I particularly like the last line. It almost brings me to believe the impasse is more sought-after and comfortable than the currents of chaos.
Nice writing! Good to review you again.

[zainul]

Hello Heyley,
Thank you for the heartening and admiring review.
I feel very relaxed by the lovely comments you have offered.
Really,it made me to smile happily.
Thanks for your favor.
Besst wishes,
Zainul

[MOON]

Wonderfully expressed in three words. Confusion scatters the mind.

[zainul]

Thank you Moon for stopping by to express your your admiring view on the piece.
This means a lot to me.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Confusion can sometimes..... make one feel like there's no where to run no where to hide.... feeling trapped......

You've described this well...

[zainul]

You are very correct to interpret the state of confusion.
It is very difficult to rest in comfort in such situation.
Thanks for the great contribution.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your welcome... :o)

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

"Escape in vain"

Like it :)

[zainul]

Thank you Kanchan for the admiring review.
I am very glad to know that you liked it.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[Neha Godambe]

i have found myself in this state too... Infact, alot many times.... alas! all in vain

[zainul]

Thanks for sharing.
Sometimes,we are helpless in such condition.
Perhaps the psychologists may suggest how to avoid confusion and recover from the consequences caused by confusion.
I hope some experts will contribute their opinions.

[Neha Godambe]

Strong words!!!

[zainul]

Thank you Neha for the admiring review.

[Valentine]

Nice one..very well done..Valentine

[zainul]

Thank you Valentine for your admiring review.
This means a lot to me.

[Valentine]

You are welcome..I haven't heard from you in a while..Katihe

[zainul]

Sorry for the lack of communication for a while.
I will get in touch soon.
Thanks for stopping by,dear friend.
Zainul

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

It's a beautiful work. You expressed everything in just three lines. Ten years ago, I also feel the same. Confusion almost cause me to death. I don't know why i am living...why I am in this place...why I have to do something I don't really like.....everything is a question to me.
I am happy I survived that hitch.
You're great!

[zainul]

Thank you Dhaye for sharing the important crisis in your life.
I feel very glad that this humble piece reminded your confusion that almost cause your death. I am very happy to learn that you could survive that hitch.
I am very grateful to you for being so generous.
I am also very happy that you can still teach and contribute towards the betterment of your people.