Holy Child

I met a cute little girl in the staircase

I was surprised by the sweet words of the little child
She was standing on the staircase holding the railing
She was a   sweet little girl and her look was mild
I looked at her and wondered if she was ailing

But,she was in good health and looked quite bright
She requested  me in fondling voice to call her mother
She told me that she was alone in home and took  fright
Looking around I found none to look after her

I wanted to comfort  her through words for some time
Asked her name  and tried to make her smile
She told her name and recited a nursery rhyme 
I thought that her mother would come in a while

She looked   happy and I thought to leave her alone
I assured her that her mother would come soon
But,she was not ready to see me gone
I became surprised again as I was not at all known

She wanted someone to stay with her for protection
I  felt very pleased to see the wit of the  little girl
She knew how to capture someone's attention
I wanted to call her as a lovely  blessed pearl

My waiting with the little girl did not last too long
I heard footsteps on the staircase sometime later
A woman came hurriedly  and felt something wrong
The girl's face became brighter and she looked better

I told her mother that the child was gripped by fear
Her mother looked   strangely as if nothing happened
The holy child sought caress and  tried to cheer
I felt relaxed to think that the crisis came to the end 

Reviews

[Kattie Karpo]

To tell the truth I recently started reading the poems except russian poets.
So creativity foreign poets is new for me, at least without being translated into Russian :) I really like your poem.
Children are the symbol of innocence and you created the image of infinite light.
Reading your poem helped me to forget about some sad things. Thank you very much

[zainul]

I feel very blessed and honored by your inspiring review and generous compliments.
This is really a pleasure to learn that reading my poem helped you to forget about some sad things.
Thank you Kattie for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Onku Ghosh]

The narration.... of an innocent child seeking comfort and protection......in the form of a poem is wonderful. Reading the poem my heart instantly goes out to the little girl.Such is the allure of little children......you can't just ignore them.You have put across your feelings very well

[zainul]

Thank you for the wonderful words to review the piece.
I am highly pleased to read your admiring review.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Mary Christabel George]

Sir, It was a great story rather happening which you presented in the form of a poem with some rhyming in some of the sweet stanzas. the relation between mother & child, relation between an admirer of child & the child herself , the state of a girl child has always interested me. And it was a gift reading this piece. Children have always intrigued me. Thanks for sharing a great experience.

[zainul]

Thank you Mary for the wonderful review.:)
Your love and passion for the children have emerged like a blooming flower through the amazing words you have chosen to write the review.
We have become older and wonder how our childhood days were for us and for our parents.
This is very true that our parents brought us up by their love,labor,sacrifices and prayers.
Let's take the opportunity to thank our parents for their noble services for us and let us also pray to be good parents as they were for most of us.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this humble piece.

[Mary Christabel George]

Yes, You are right sir... We should be grateful to our parents for the efforts that they have put up to make us grow in their love. And it should be vow that we too give our children what we received from our parents. Welcome Sir.

[zainul]

Thank you lovely friend for the wonderful remarks.
Love and care make our lives better.
Yes,we should be grateful to our parents for the efforts that they have put up to make us grow in their love.
Thanks for stopping by again.:)

[myrt2013]

Zainut, it is evident that you have a kind heart and the ability to express noble feelings in your poems.

[Cherrie Palmer]

This poem is brilliant, it captures the purest nature of mankind; you expose the innocence of a child and if this story could find a center stage it would steal center stage, again most brilliant. Bravo!

[zainul]

Thank you Cherrie for your admiring review.
I feel very honored and blessed by your generous compliments.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Cherrie Palmer]

it was a Father' Day treat for sure I loved it

[zainul]

Very nice of you for the Father' Day treat.:)
Thanks a lot.

[Cherrie Palmer]

the heart of a father never sleep's :) and your story show-cases lovely

[zainul]

The mother's heart never sleeps as well.:)
I am very charmed by your wonderful gifts.

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) thank you

[zainul]

:)

[DIVYA]

Great story telling sir. You kept the reader gripped till the end. The conclusion was pleasing and heartwarming. The reader wants to reach out to the little girl and feels happy the child is finally pacified. Little children always tug at our heartstrings especially if they look insecure or troubled. You brought that sentiment very effectively and touchingly here.

[zainul]

Again a warm and heartening review from my dear friend,Divya.
This inspires me a lot.
I appreciate your generous compliments.
You have nicely explained that little children always tug at our heartstrings especially if they look insecure or troubled.I like to add that some children can't explain their problems.
The parents and older people may help them by teaching how to seek help in case of troubles.
The time is very complex.We need to handle the situations very cautiously.
Thank you for stopping by.:)

[DIVYA]

It was my pleasure sir. Being a mother to a 6 and a 7 yr old, I could fully empathize with this poem. And yes, we have to teach them to communicate their troubles effectively in these difficult and challenging times. It is indeed the need of the hour. Thanks again.

[zainul]

Thanks for the appreciation from the stand point of your personal experience.
I suppose such teaching and sharing will help the upbringing of children until they are adequately equipped to face the challenges.
I hope your children are growing nicely.
Wish their health and well being.:)

[Prritiy]

sweet story of sweet child. liked it.
best wishes

[zainul]

Thank you sweet friend for the sweet review.:)
I am very glad that you liked it.

[Prritiy]

you are welcome Zainul :)

[zainul]

:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Aethereal]

Beautiful true story. A child is so much like a pretty flower, rooted to where she is, and at he mercy of an immediate environment that's filled with both darkness and light. You were her light in the darkness of her fears.

[zainul]

You have acquired great mastery of reviewing that can inspire immensely.
I feel very pleased for mentioning me as her light in the darkness of her fears.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Marie]

I am so glad you wre there for that child, and that she was able to trust you.

[zainul]

Really,she trusted me.
This was a new experience for me.
I was also impressed by her intelligence when she requested me to close the door of their apartment.I thought being alone she developed a sense of responsibility too.
Thank you Marie for stopping by to review the piece and share your opinion.
This means a world to me.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, we need to protect our children...and this captures the feeling of being lost in fear when there is separation...the child and parent are just as scared...

glad this had a happy ending...

[zainul]

Thank you Jacob for the admiring review.
It is humble effort to depict the true story that happened today.
Perhaps I could not present it perfectly.
Nevertheless,some message could be shared.
The child about two years old came on the stair as her mother went to a nearby shop on a street.
The child was left at home alone.At one stage the child felt frightened in the large apartment.
When I was coming back from another shop to my residence at the fourth floor,she asked me in very mild voice to call her mother.Her tone was very polite though she was very young.
I could not advance any further step upwards and stopped to chat and comfort her.
The rest of the story is at your disposal.
Thanks for stopping by to inspire me immensely.:)

[writ rajat]

its a fantastic poem

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Thank you for sharing. Protecting our children should be our full time job...so precious. Excellent read and write.

[zainul]

I adore your admiring review,Brandon.
You have emphasized the need of protecting our children.
Your support and compliments have inspired me immensely.
Thank you for stopping by, dear friend.