Nature

When internet goes and miss my online friends

I feel very bad and  wait to see how it ends

Sometimes the connection comes  very soon

Then I think it this is a great boon

But,sometimes the internet does not come for hours

Then I curse for  everything and look for others

Today I lost the internet connection

I got angry and restless for genuine reason

 

Waiting for sometime  cursing the  service provider

I went to the veranda to take some fresh air

Looked down my flat to the plot cleared recently

For building a large  apartment  complex matching the city

Various plants and grasses grew on the vacant land

A piece of oasis came from nowhere by some magic wand

In the middle of the lovely forest  there was a little pond

Flowers of water lily bloomed there to create friendly bond

 

More scenes awaited me in the mundane garden

Many butterflies were flying in the flowery den

Suddenly a mongoose came into my sight

It was joined by several others from left and right

They were playing   special game that charmed my eyes

I thought a snake might be around to give me  surprise

At this point three jolly  kids rushed to the plot

The furry mammals ran away into a hidden slot

 

I became happy by the events and started to ponder

Nature is the treasure of beauty and infinite wonder

 

Reviews

[Kenaz]

Unplugging is an enriching experience. It makes us see that the world does not revolve around our phones or televisions. My favorite line in the poem is when you describe the garden as mundane. Such a simple choice of words, but it feels like you are still angry and are hesitating to accept the beautiful gift of nature. Thank you for a jolly piece

[zainul]

Thanks for the wonderful review.
Your interpretation of my mood at that time is really enjoyable.
I feel very honored by your great compliments.:)

[Michael G. Smith]

Reality is better than virtual worlds any day of the week. God is nature and man is internet.

[zainul]

I have no better words to explain like you.
Thank you Michael for the wonderful review.
This means a world to me.

[Aethereal]

Nature's the Creator of everything, and the source of this Creator is a mystery. It's feels good to contemplate both when all else fails us.

[zainul]

You have expressed the truth about the Creator quite strongly.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring words.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! May the Source be with you!

[Tom]

Despite mans wondrous innovation and creativity, he is and never will be a match for mother-nature's sublime beauty!

A uplifting and inspiring nature poem, well penned indeed Sir!

[zainul]

Thank you Tom for the inspiring review.
I agree with you about the limitation of man in this regard.
Thank you for stopping to grace this piece.

[Ranjita Ghosh Dasgupta]

truely nature is the treasure of beauty and infinite wonder..but sadly we are on the verge of losing it for ever.. my poem An Encounter With Nature too deals with the same issue..nicely written Zainul.

[zainul]

Thank you Ranjita for your supportive review.
You made my day.
I will soon read An Encounter With Nature and enjoy its content.
(Ekhon niche jassi.Laundri theke kapor anbo.Ekta biete jete hobe ektu pore)
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Ranjita Ghosh Dasgupta]

Ok..enjoy ur evening..catch up later..

[zainul]

Laundry theke eshe snan kore abar boshlam.
Biete jabar age kisukhon adda dea jete pare.

[Deron Alexis]

a wonderful poem my friend comprehensive style that's easy to follow a flow that's easy to get wrapped up in very well written keep it up :)

[zainul]

Thank you Deron for the very inspiring review.
This means a world to me.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.:)

[Distantview123]

Nature is indeed the treasure of beauty and infinite wonder. Sometimes we are too wrapped up in other things to notice. A nicely written piece.

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the admiring review.
Yes,we are too wrapped up in other things to notice.
Thank you for for stopping by to grace this piece.