Speak To Me

Speak To Me

A Poem by Scirrocco

Speak to me peacefully

And I'll give you a piece of me

Talk to me like a human being

Then we can write a song to sing

 

We can share words

Speak on this that and the third

Fill the air with adjectives, nouns and verbs

Forget about silence yo I wanna be heard

 

Rap to me openly

Argue with me truthfully

Don't be afraid to speak

About anything and everything

 

What are your dreams and aspirations?

What's your inspirations

I'm curious to know so just let it flow

For the sake of conversation

 

See here between me and you

Every subject is on the menu

Be it moral, be it sinful

I'm not easily embarrassed so nothings taboo

 

Just pick a conversation piece

We can engage in a verbal feast

Anything from sex to the weather in the northeast

Share thoughts just to say the least

© 2008 Scirrocco


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Great writing Scirrocco!

As always, your true spirit shines, your ability to pull of a write like this, with a rhythm scheme held solidly through out just blows my mind. Excellent!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write. The longing to share words with another can be profound and is described so creatively here. Great rhythm.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a cool, inviting piece that just asks a person for a minute to vibe. It's something that's easy to relate to and shows your down to earth-ness. Great read.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you do have a very musical hook to your poetry, I can easily see this as a rap, but it is also a very beautiful poem and your descriptive style is always eye-catching. excellent and thank u for sharing :D

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can hear lyrics and music as I read this Very well penned. Nice work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Almost read like a song. Wonderfully written, flowed great.


Great Write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well done and with great flow my friend. Great Write.

Dostani

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rap to me openly
Argue with me truthfully...

I completely agree! I've told you that I love your style. And this piece is no exception.

Just pick a conversation piece
We can engage in a verbal feast...

I love those two lines especially. Being a Libra - I love to debate and play the devils advocate - on whatever subject - I can choose either side...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Scirrocco
Scirrocco

New Jerusalem, NJ



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A true Scorpio and it shows in what I write. I'm not one to follow a format, I just write... Sometimes I'm straight to the point with what I'm saying and at other times you have to actually think abou.. more..

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