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A Poem by zendikar
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laying on my tummy writing lol

"
just the two
of us
we can do it
if we try...
wait a second woops thats a song already hehehehe...
I miss you so 
when you hide away 
i promise you
ill save you one day
but so you know
i always try
to break your walls 
and see inside,
theres a deepness
like no other
so mysterious,
beautiful,
frightening,
but it is you 
and thats all i want
all i need
all i ask for
I will always do anything for you
and i know youre the same
just ask me ....
im always and forever yours

© 2010 zendikar


Author's Note

zendikar
I LIKE TURTLES

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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaw, this was sweet! I liked the formatting--seems very relaxed and whatnot.

I am gathering that a lot of people have walls to climb...thought I was the only one. xD

The way you described what was beyond those walls though...it was beautifully written!

What's this about you liking turtles? xD I like ducks better but to each his/her own.

Posted 13 Years Ago


TURTLES ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And awesome write!!! Hahahahaha ur gurl likes turtles too XD

Posted 13 Years Ago


LOL! I'm glad your girl commented below or my review may have caused some problems.

Anywho, this is lovely. It's sweet that you express your feelings so openly.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is good. my favorite part is: "i always try
to break your walls
and see inside,
theres a deepness
like no other
so mysterious,
beautiful,
frightening,
but it is you
and thats all i want"

i really like this:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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zendikar
zendikar

Stroudsburg, PA



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im a simple guy i like to write things that are fairly short and to the point but with hidden deeper meanings! I also love having fun! Read my writings to learn more about me! more..

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