TEN items or less

A Poem by zendikar

1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9...... oh yeah 10

Apathy

Love

Intelligence

Victorious

Energetic

Dirt

Embalm

Asleep

Decaying

© 2010 zendikar

Author's Note

It's for a contest using ten words or less so i described life and death! (a.k.a. ALIVE&DEAD)

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That's pretty cool, actually! I loved how it spelt out ALIVE&DEAD when you looked down. Ha, if that wasn't obvious ;D
This poem is simple, yet has a complex air to it; if a 14 year old is allowed to say that! ;] My friends don't call me 21 for no reason -.-'
Haha, but I do think that, after reading this, I should read a bit more of your writing.
~N~

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on June 13, 2010
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Author

zendikar

Stroudsburg, PA

About

im a simple guy i like to write things that are fairly short and to the point but with hidden deeper meanings! I also love having fun! Read my writings to learn more about me! more..

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the story of stuff!