Water!

Water!

A Poem by zendikar
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WATER, WATER, EVERYWHERE AND LOTS OF IT TO DRINK!

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Water....
everywhere,
everyday.
fun, and dangerous
hot and cold
Water....
living requires water
yet water can kill
drinking, and drowning
shallow, and deep
Water....

Surgeon Generals Warning: Do not inhale water.... it's extremely deadly (<---not real)

© 2010 zendikar


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zendikar
WATER, WATER, EVERYWHERE AND LOTS OF IT TO DRINK!

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I have to laugh at the Surgeons General Warning. However I feel it's the best part of the poem :L

Alright I do have to admit it was clever to increase the size of the word water for every time it was repeated. It's also a transparent hopefully clear liquid. It has it's uses and without it the world wouldn't exist.

Your poem defiantly highlights all aspects of water. It gives life and takes it, but so do people, I know which I'd rather write a poem about.

Worth a read, simple and not lacking a sense of humor.

Posted 13 Years Ago


hmm...interesting lol

Posted 13 Years Ago



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zendikar
zendikar

Stroudsburg, PA



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im a simple guy i like to write things that are fairly short and to the point but with hidden deeper meanings! I also love having fun! Read my writings to learn more about me! more..

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