[Not Complicated]

...to live is to endure...

If your dead  You don't have to worry  About loosing yourself  And everything going blurry  If your dead  Pain is not an obstacle  You cant try to kill yourself  So theirs no need for hospitals  If your dead  Nothing is difficult  Your unconscious  Therefore you cannot be ridiculed  If your dead  You shed no tears  For being lonesome  So many years  If your dead  No needs  No fear  Nothing needs to be seen clear  By DD

Author's Note

Was written a decade ago, while I attended high school.

Reviews

[THERISA]

Reading this poem, i found myself, reliving my tortured school years. The following stanza is, like it, was lifted out of this time for my life:
"If your dead
Nothing is difficult
Your unconscious
Therefore you cannot be ridiculed"
There are few spelling errors concerning homonyms, which can easily fixed. Like your used "loosing", instead "losing" and "theirs" instead of "there's". Thank you, for sharing your poem with us.

[Linear]

If you're dead i guess you're dead, and thats the end of your story, but inow the feeling

[...]

. simple enough on the surface ... but we don't really know, do we? ... what if the writers cafe in hell is not open to all? ... what if there's no free access and membership? ... :) ... what if ... btw ... i think this is a fantastic poem for a teenager to write ... you did exceedingly well ... :) ...

[lawrence bear]

another fine piece,
sounds a lot like my inner demons. love it

[Hello, Goodbye]

I forgot to state that the spelling errors are sort of on purpose. I posted the poem without making any structural corrections or spelling alterations.

[Jujubee_:]]

This was a very emotional piece. I like it. Keep writing hun.

[~lost and in my fantisi..]

i like it!! good write!! =]

[snapstache]

Thanks for the reviews!
This was a very good poem.
I think everyone at sometime just wishes they were dead.
*.*

[Satchmo's Gal]

I can so relate. This is such a great poem. I love it

[Hello, Goodbye]

Chelsea, I did have a difficult time in H.S. due to depression. While the despondency never actually went away, I did learn to deal with it better.