A Despondent Life Elixir

A Despondent Life Elixir

A Poem by Hello, Goodbye
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..it always remains..

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The pain is beautiful 
It's the only infliction that deems me alive 
A sunset is equal to un-answering darkness 
But despondency with clarity shines 

The pain is a melancholic addiction 
It's a foul passion that consumes my soul 
The sadness reminds me of living 
Even if its a message that is empty and cold 


- DD

© 2010 Hello, Goodbye


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You have embraced the darkness very well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


yes, i know this space...it can be a way of life; it is good that you see it very well

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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. oh, but i do hope that pain is not the only proof of life ... that would be truly painful ... yet this is absolutely beautifully written ... your words and thoughts are from a profound realm ... and they flow really well ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Hello, Goodbye

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